Overall Comments
Part three of this module has focused on the importance of being a visually literate graphic designer by exploring visual dynamics. Overall your response to part three has been very good, stronger in some places than others. Illustration work is developing well, using Illustrator and Photoshop with confidence, next use InDesign for graphics work. Great to see exercises being utilised throughout. Great progress, well done
My respond to the feedback
Thanks for the positive feedback. I really enjoyed working on this part and glad to see that I am doing fine.
What I need to do next:
- I need to test my ideas on others Also, make notes on what I have learnt from the exercise; what went well and what could I do differently next time.
- Next time I need to use InDesign when using text and grid structure.
- I need to use traditional methods such as paint/pastels/pencils or cut colour paper more to help me make spontaneous decisions, then use drafts to develop further using digital techniques.
- I need to collect images and words from magazines and newspapers as well as my own photographs.
- Need to question my work to ensure communication works as I intend.
- Through my research, I need to critically analyse examples and state how they have informed my own work.
Following websites have been visited to study about the artists and designers, who have mentioned on the feedback:
- https://www.tate.org.uk/art/artists/bridget-riley-1845
- https://www.tate.org.uk/art/artists/mark-rothko-1875
- https://www.tate.org.uk/art/artists/yves-klein-1418
- https://www.camillewalala.com/latest-work/2019/12/4/walala-pump-and-go-fort-smith-arkansas
- https://hattiestewart.tumblr.com
- https://jardinmajorelle.com/ang/
- http://www.designishistory.com/1920/jan-tschichold/
- https://www.dezeen.com/2020/04/17/erik-spiekermann-forward-festival-virtual-design-festival-vdf/
- https://www.debutart.com/artist/alan-kitching
- https://www.aiga.org/medalist-aprilgreiman
- https://www.dezeen.com/tag/Neville-Brody/
- https://leadercreative.com/about/bio/
- https://www.paulrand.design/life/biography.html
- https://www.moma.org/artists/4163?=undefined&page=&direction=
- https://plato.stanford.edu/entries/neurath/visual-education.html
- https://www.ted.com/talks/marian_bantjes_intricate_beauty_by_design/transcript?language=en
- http://www.artnet.com/artists/josef-albers/
Maryam: OCA Graphic Design 